Wednesday, June 16, 2010

A poem I wrote several years back.


Bathe

Condensation beads over the mirrored image
Of a woman reclining in a porcelain tub.
Long limbs, excessive curves, and delicate neck.
Full lips invoke, “Grandmother.”
A petticoated figure draws close on a wooden stool.
The worn faucet burbles shut the flow of steaming water.
Vapor ribbons rise with the deep scent of lavender.
The ancient voice whispers secrets.

“Catch the light when it dances across your palm.
Quickly child, or it will be lost!”


“Let a man know you are strong. Don’t let him weaken you with need.”

The windowpane is sprinkled with flakes
From a shimmering winter sky.
An elderly hand smoothes back damp ringlets
Before a sponge, lush with suds, glides across naked skin
Bestowing the grace of ablution.
Age-soiled skin sags while
Water baptizes a firm, freckled shoulder
Sending rivulets to race over pale-nippled breasts.

“Hold tight to your trust
– but live life with an open hand, not a closed fist.”

“The sooner one realizes she is flawed, the stronger she will be.”

The hum of womanly conversation mingles with
The lap of the bath. Swirls of soap pool around one knee
Magnifying the sliver of a scar gained from a teenage tumble
Against a broken bottle. The older woman traces the mark
And winks at the younger.

“Savor each failure --- and each accomplishment.”

Wizened eyes once bright are dimmed now in death.
“There is no wisdom greater than kindness.”
With a sidelong glance in the evening light, drowsy lids open,
“Embrace the wonder of each new experience”
The water is icy and an unforgiving gurgle escapes the drain.
A solitary figure is reflected in the dressing table mirror.
“Dance on the dawn of each passing moment.”


copyright.ragamuffingurl.2010

4 comments:

Words A Day said...

Thats a lovely poem, i love the voices running through it!

Stafford Ray said...

Grandparents are special. I should know, I am one and my grand children listen to me more than their parents did! Lovely poem, loving sentiments. Lifted my spirits.

ragamuffingurl said...

Thanks so much Niam - I hope you don't mind that I stole your background from shabbyblogs. I dearly love it! Yours is beautiful. Who said that imitation is the sincerest form of flattery? It's true you have good taste!

Stafford Ray - this poem was born out of my desire to have known my grandmother. I only knew about her because she died before I was born.
Blessings to you!

Thistle Cove Farm said...

So many voices, heard and yet to be heard; so much wisdom gained a kernel at a time; so many mistakes, learned and let go. This is a lovely poem.